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Post by colleen4ever on Aug 9, 2007 21:29:59 GMT -5
Well, if you'd like a little addition...if ya don't mind...I think it would be really romantic if right after Hunter says 'will you allow me to renew our vows,' he just says, 'Will you marry me...again?'
What do you think? Littl add on if you don't mind, but if you don't like th scene you don't have to add it.
Hope that's alright with you.
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Post by GundamZero on Aug 9, 2007 22:23:10 GMT -5
Sure, I'll add that bit. Thanks for the suggestion. I'm currently right at the part where Hunter and Colleen are about to return.
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Post by colleen4ever on Aug 9, 2007 22:46:39 GMT -5
Aw thanks. I' was a bit worried that you ight be offended. I'm glad you lik it,.
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Post by GundamZero on Aug 9, 2007 23:53:43 GMT -5
No problem. I'm midway through the battle in Ch.6 now, and I hope to finish it up and have it posted either tomorrow or Saturday.
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Post by colleen4ever on Aug 10, 2007 0:59:14 GMT -5
I'm looking forward to seeing it.
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Post by GundamZero on Aug 10, 2007 11:12:53 GMT -5
Yeah, and this time, I won't have to worry about Omnitrix12 being negative with his reviews, since he won't be able to review it. Let some of your other friends know about my stories, and ask them to give a review if possible. I'd like to see what they think.
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Post by colleen4ever on Aug 10, 2007 17:23:52 GMT -5
OK, will do. I don't know how many of them are into Batman but I'll let them know.
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Post by GundamZero on Aug 10, 2007 19:57:13 GMT -5
Thanks. I'll be putting it up tonight.
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Post by colleen4ever on Aug 10, 2007 22:09:32 GMT -5
You did a great job!
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Post by GundamZero on Aug 10, 2007 22:25:56 GMT -5
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it so much. What parts did you like best?
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Post by colleen4ever on Aug 11, 2007 1:24:04 GMT -5
I liked how Hunter stood up for Colleen, how h proposd to her and the vow-renewal ceremony, and the ending. Clean...yet to the point!
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Post by GundamZero on Aug 11, 2007 9:27:45 GMT -5
Those were my favorites too, as well as the final battle in the hangar, especially when Hunter+Colleen let Muzzle loose on Joker.
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Post by colleen4ever on Aug 11, 2007 13:05:29 GMT -5
Now THAT was funny!!!'
Oh as Slapy Squirrel would say, 'Now THAT'S comedy!
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Post by GundamZero on Aug 11, 2007 22:07:01 GMT -5
Yeah. Joker was like "NOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!"
How are you coming along with the first chapter of 'To Save The Prince'?
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Post by colleen4ever on Aug 12, 2007 1:02:37 GMT -5
I sent you the first part. What did you think?
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