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Post by GundamZero on Jul 29, 2007 9:47:38 GMT -5
Their tags do start blinking, and the reason they speak telepathically is so they don't alarm the twins. They do tell them they have to go though, and Cassie and Alexander understand that their mom and dad have to go save the world again. Hunter and Colleen's new telepathic abilities born from their love for each other are the greatest indication that true love is powerful enough to conquer any obstacle. And yes, once they've beaten Parvo, Groomer, and Joker, and are on their way home in the Stealth Rover, Hunter says "Guess what, everyone?" Blitz, Samantha, Exile, and Kasha: "WHAT?" Hunter: "Colleen and I have renewed our wedding vows, and when we get home, her and I are going to book a second honeymoon in Hawaii, and for sticking by us, even after Batman put Colleen down like that, we're bringing all of you with us!" Blitz: "All right!" Samantha: "Hawaii...oh, my...I've dreamed of going ever since I saw the pictures in the tour book, but being there in person...this is going to be so wonderful!" Exile: "Da, we could use vacation after this mission." Kasha: "I have always wanted to try pineapple soda" Shag: "Rah, Ree Roo." (Yeah, me too) Colleen: "Thanks alot, everyone, for supporting us all this time." Blitz: "You're our friends, Colleen, and Hunter too. That's what friends are for, Ja?" Colleen: "Thank you, Blitz." *to Hunter, telepathically* 'Huntie, I can't wait to go back there again. It was so romantic the first time around, but now that we can connect on every level, it'll be the ultimate opportunity for us to express our pure and undying love.' Hunter: 'Colleen, there's nothing I won't do for you, and you will always be in my heart, forever.' Colleen: *tears of joy fill her eyes*'Huntie...You'll always be in my heart too.' *Hunter and Colleen hand control of the Stealth Rover to Samantha and Blitz, pull out the fold out bed in the rear, and fall asleep. The Rovers fly home, eager to get packed for their upcoming vacation.*
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 29, 2007 12:22:47 GMT -5
Hee, hee, he, I can't WAIT to see Batman and Robin get what's coming to them! Oh, and Joker, Groommer, and Parvo too! I bet the scene where Huntr roposes to her all over again is gonna be romantic as well! (how sad am I, I'm writing all about romance and I nrv had any myself! )
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 29, 2007 12:45:05 GMT -5
I'm sure you'll eventually find someone that'll love you for who you are.
Here's the scene from where Hunter and Colleen return:
*The Rovers are fighting a losing battle, as are Batman and Robin, since Parvo and Joker's troops are outnumbering them at least 10 to 1.*
Samantha: "I hope you see now how much we DO NEED Colleen, Mr. Caped Crusader! She's one of our best fighters, and she's tough, she's fearless, and with her and Hunter around, even this many enemy soldiers wouldn't be a problem for us." Batman: "You're right...I was a fool. I want to extend my deepest apologies." Robin: "So do I. From now on, we'll look at women as our equals in battle." Blitz: "About time. Colleen had to remind me SEVERAL times of how good she was in combat, and my head is still ringing from it." Exile: "Well, it is because you were being weird boy, but you have changed for better." Samantha: "That he has." Kasha: "I really wish Hunter and Colleen would come back...I'd like to live long enough to have my own children..." Parvo: "Hahaha...I think you're a little late, fleabag. You're all about to go to the big doghouse in the sky, and we're going to...*hears a loud roaring noise outside* Groomer: "General, what's that noise?" Joker: "You don't suppose the other mutts are back, do you?" Parvo: "Of course not! The way that airheaded mutt and miss prissy collie stormed out of here, they'll probably never come back." Joker: "Then WHAT IS THAT NOISE?!" *Just then, there's a huge roaring noise, and the doors to the hangar explode under 30mm cannon fire.* Samantha: "Oh...my...god...IT'S THE STEALTH ROVER!!! THEY'RE BACK!!!" Blitz: "Hah...Hey metalhead, crazy lady, and laughing boy, you're all in big trouble now!" Exile: "Da...Is time to put your plans on ice, permanently!" Kasha: "You'd best surrender now, Parvo, before you get your clockski cleaned!" Parvo: "NEVER!!!! GET THOSE MUTTS!!!" *Suddenly, another voice rings out across the hangar* Hunter: "WE'RE BAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCKKKKKKK!!!" Colleen: "Did you miss us?" Parvo: "Oh no...it can't be..." *Hunter and Colleen retract their helmet visors* Groomer: "General...It is them!" Joker: "Uh...oh..." One of Joker's goons: "Boss...what are we gonna do? We're no match for the mutt and collie." Joker: "Don't give me that! GET THEM!!!" Colleen: "HIYA!!! ARIZONA!!! UTAH!!! NEVADA!!!"*Kicks three of Jokers goons across the hangar* Hunter: *Brings his fist crashing down onto another goon's head.* *In short order, all the bad guys are out of commission, Batman calls the FBI, and the villains are off to prison* Batman: "I want to apologize, Colleen. My attitude towards you earlier was totally wrong, and I now see that women can fight just as well as men. You've really taught Robin and I a valuable lesson today." Robin: "Yeah...I'm sorry too. Can you ever forgive us?" Hunter: "Well...since you put it that way...sure. Just don't let it happen again." Batman: "We promise, it won't." Colleen: "Good. I'll hold ya to it." *The two teams of heroes head off, Batman and Robin in the Batmobile, and the Rovers in the Stealth Rover.*
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 29, 2007 15:08:23 GMT -5
Hee,hee. That's telling them. So, avo was prsent when Hunter and Colleen told Batman off and stormedaway, but no one else was, righty> Caus otherwis Sam and Kasha probably would have gone off too. But that's what I call karma! NOW they'll see that women are equal to men!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 29, 2007 22:22:51 GMT -5
Yeah, no kidding! One of Joker's goons even takes aim at Hunter, and Colleen says, "Bad move, 'guv. Nobody tries to hurt my husband. I hope you've got your medical insurance updated!" Goon: "Wha..." Colleen: "HIYA!!! KNIGHT RIDER!!! AIRWOLF!!! MAGNUM P.I!" *sends the goon flying.* Hunter: "Wow...thanks, sweetheart." Colleen: "I wasn't about to let him kill the one I love, or rob our children of the father they love so dearly. Let's take out the rest of these goons." Hunter:" Sounds like a plan. Let's do it!"
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 30, 2007 0:57:39 GMT -5
That's so perfect! I hope Batman sees that and his eyes just about pop out of his cowl! Anyone can see what a strong, brave warrior she is and how valuaable she is to the team!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 30, 2007 12:02:18 GMT -5
Yeah. Robin's reaction is "Holy Toledo, Batman...Colleen's going house on these goons. We really shouldn't have made her and her husband angry earlier." Batman: "You're right, Robin. We'd best get in there, before they take all the goons down and leave nothing for us."
In short, Batman and Robin learn just how fierce Colleen is in battle, not to mention Samantha and Kasha.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 30, 2007 12:34:10 GMT -5
A lesson well leanred, batman. This is gonna be a SUPER story!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 30, 2007 13:11:28 GMT -5
Yeah, no kidding.
Here's the ending:
*The Rovers are all in Hawaii, enjoying a well-deserved one week vacation. The sun is beginning to set, and the three couples (Hunter+Colleen, Blitz+Samantha, and Exile+Kasha) are all together, having the time of their lives.* Hunter: "Colleen, this is so perfect. A beautiful island, a beautiful sunset, and I've got the world's most beautiful woman at my side, and our two beautiful kids. This is truly a great time to be alive." Colleen: "Huntie...being with you makes me feel so good, it's as if nothing can go wrong as long as we're together." Hunter: "We will always be together, Colleen. You, me, the twins, and the team, for the rest of our lives, and I will never leave your side." Colleen: "Oh Huntie...I love you, with all my heart." Hunter: "And I love you too, Colleen." *They kiss passionately, then take a walk with their twins along the beach, before going to their hotel room to get ready for bed.* Blitz: "Well, Sam, here we are...Hawaii. I never thought I'd find someone like you to share my life with, but you've helped me to not only move past my immaturity and arrogance, but you've also made me realize that I can find true happiness." Samantha: "Blitz, I will always love you, because it's not what's on the outside that matters to me, it's the heart of gold that you have underneath." Blitz: "I love you too, Samantha...."*they kiss each other, then they go to get something to drink (A pineapple soda for Samantha, and a peppermint milkshake for Blitz), before going to their room for the night.* Exile: "Kasha, you are such beautiful girl, and this tropical sunset makes you look absolutely radiant." Kasha: "Exile...you are such sweet dog...I love you so much." Exile: "I love you too, Kasha. Come, my little snowflower. Let us have one of those pineapple sodas before we go to bedski." Kasha: "Oh Exile...yes." *they have their drinks, then go to their room for the night.*
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 30, 2007 17:47:51 GMT -5
Wow...I think my keyboard is strting to melt! That is so sweet and great. So, how are you coming along with this? Is it halfway finished?
Take that Omnatrix12!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 30, 2007 21:33:47 GMT -5
I'm just about done writing it all down. I'll be starting it up in a couple days, probably on Wednesday.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 30, 2007 21:48:15 GMT -5
I can't wait to see it! Oh, I bettr start the beginning of our story then!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 30, 2007 22:18:35 GMT -5
Great! I'm looking forward to it! Just send me the parts that you write, and I'll type them in on my computer, then add the action scenes.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 31, 2007 1:05:14 GMT -5
Ok, well you should concentrate on finishing your Batman story first and when it';s up then we can concentrate on our story. So, when we do this, is it gonna be in separate chapters or one big chapters like your other stories?
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 31, 2007 12:34:34 GMT -5
Since you're used to doing it in seperate chapters, why don't you send me each individual chapter, and I'll use my word processor to type it up, make any additions that I think would add a little flavor to the story (Nothing major). I'll keep you informed of the Rovers/Batman fic's progress, and when It's finished, we can start our co-authored fic 'To Save The Prince.'
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