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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 24, 2007 1:09:14 GMT -5
Oh. My. GOD! That person is just distrubed! Come ON< Hunter is NOT an airhead!!! He's NOT stupid and the person who wrote that obviously has hardly ever seen an ep of the show!
Wait, was this the fic where Colleen sicked Muzzle on Hunter?
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 24, 2007 12:18:29 GMT -5
No, it was a totally different one. I'm glad that it's gone now, and the author banned, so that you and I will never have to see that kind of anti-Hunter trash on Fanfiction.net again. In my fic, while Hunter is taking out Mordred's zombies with the .50AE Desert Eagle that Confuse-Us gave him, the other Rovers are using a new, high-powered modified assault rifle, the XM-29, which fires 7.62mm rounds, and also features a 20mm grenade launcher. The ones the Rovers use are specially modified with anti-recoil devices, so that Samantha and Kasha can fire them without having to worry about the heavy recoil. As for the armor, Professor Hubert added a lot of his creative touches to it. It's got grappling lines built into the wrists, hover jets in the boots, and, like the Master Chief's armor, the Rovers' Spec. Ops armor can even allow the wearer to operate in the vacuum of space for up to thirty minutes. A pic of the XM-29: Here's a cute scene from the end, just before Hunter serenades Colleen with "Glory of Love". Hunter: "Hang on, Colleen. I've got a surprise for you." Colleen: "Huntie...falling in love with you truly was the best thing that's ever happened to me." Hunter: "Same here, Colleen. I'll be right back." *Hunter leaves, and Colleen wonders what he's up to. Soon, she smells brown sugar, cinnamon, and maple syrup. Her mouth starts to water. Hunter soon walks back in, with a tray bearing a cup of tea for Colleen, a glass of milk for Hunter, and two plates full of pancakes covered in maple syrup. There's even a red rose on the tray next to Colleen's plate.* Colleen: "Huntie...y-you didn't have to do all this..." Hunter: "I wanted to, Colleen. I love you, and I want to make this night all about you. I'm sure it's been awhile since you've had any real food, so dig in." Colleen: "Thank you so much, Huntie!"*cuts a small piece of one of her pancakes, and pops it into her mouth* "Gods...Huntie, this is abso-bloomin'-lutely delicious! I-I never had any idea you could cook like this! Where'd you get the idea for this?" Hunter: "I just made it up as I went along. I just took regular buttermilk pancake batter, added some brown sugar and cinnamon, then poured some maple syrup on them once they were done." Colleen: "Well, either way, this is the most romantic night I've had in a long time, Huntie." Hunter: *kisses her* "That's nothing. I'm just getting warmed up." *turns on his CD Player, and sings "Glory of Love". After that, they cuddle together, and after an hour or so, they go in, take a shower, put fresh sheets on the bed, then they kiss each other one last time, before snuggling up in each others' arms and falling asleep.*
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 24, 2007 12:24:41 GMT -5
Sniff...that was so great. Nice how you kept it clean. (yeah right..JUST cuddling..OK ) But that aught to show all those dumb Anti-Hunter or Hunter is an airhead people that Colleen belongs with HIM, NOT Blitz! Man, I wish there was a Hunter here in NJ! Wow...I can't wait to see what you can do with our fan-fic! I bet together we can come up with the most romantic wedding on earth!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 24, 2007 13:07:12 GMT -5
Yeah, I agree. Hunter and Colleen deserve the best wedding possible, since they are destined soulmates. The zombie fight sequence is also, IMO, the perfect example of how much Hunter is totally selfless, and will do anything to protect his friends.
Here's an excerpt:
The Rovers began to move through the forest, their helmet-mounted lights shining ahead, illuminating the path. Suddenly, the motion tracker built into the heads-up display of the visor of Hunter's helmet painted movement to Blitz's left, and he yelled out over his helmet's communicator, "BLITZ, GET DOWN!!" Blitz ducked, just in time to avoid a zombie wielding a tree branch. Hunter drew a bead on the zombie, and fired his Desert Eagle, the powerful 12.7mm round took the zombie out of the picture, and Blitz said "Danke" (Thank you in German). Blitz then repayed the favor, when a zombie hurled a hand grenade that he'd gotten from a nearby military base, and Blitz kicked it back at him, and said "Verziehung, aber sie haben Ihre granate verghessen!" (German for "Excuse me, but you forgot your grenade!") Moments later, the grenade detonated, blowing up at least twelve zombies. The Rovers made quick work of the other zombies, then Hunter said, "Okay, team. Let's get in there and save Colleen!" Just as the Rovers were getting ready to plant the C-4 plastic explosive charge on the door to Mordred's castle, the last remaining zombie, which had been hiding behind a tree, charged forward and tried to grab Kasha. Hunter saw it coming, and called out, "KASHA, BEHIND YOU!!!" She rolled to her left, and Hunter fired a tri-burst from his pistol, the rounds punching through the zombie's head, chest, and stomach. Hunter walked over, and said, "Nobody messes with my teammates, and I mean NOBODY!" Kasha said, "Comrade Hunter, where did you learn to shoot like that?" Hunter holstered his pistol, then said, "Lots of practice on the firing range back at Headquarters, and I play Halo just about every day, either multiplayer with the guys here, or single player campaign mode." After that, Hunter accepted a block of C-4 from Exile, planted it on the door, wired it, then said, "FIRE IN THE HOLE!!!" Once they had all taken cover, Hunter pressed the detonator, and the door was obliterated. Hunter and the rest of the team moved towards the wrecked doorway, and Hunter activated his helmet's built-in thermal sensors, then switched to night-vision, and finally, back to normal. He said, "All clear, team. Let's move in. Engage active camouflage." Seconds later, the Rovers all faded from sight, as the cloaking generators integrated into their armor made them totally invisible. Colleen was somewhere up ahead, and Hunter was dead set on getting her back.
As for where I got the German translations, I know limited German, thanks to my father, who spent time with the Air Force during 'Nam. He was a mechanic on planes like the F-4 Phantom and F-105 Thunderchief, and was stationed on several Air Force bases in Germany. I also learned some from the PS1/PS2 video game series Medal Of Honor, in which you play as soldiers of the OSS (Office of Strategic Services, the forerunner of today's CIA). And they say you can't learn anything useful from video games? HAH!
Anyway, what do you think of the zombie battle sequence?
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 24, 2007 17:19:15 GMT -5
Wow, that was amazing! Also shows how much Blitz has matured when he saved Hunter from the granade. That's amazing piece of work, certainly a lot better than I could do! Can I send a carbon copy to sevral pople who think Hunter's an airhad and shouldn't be the leader?
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 24, 2007 21:19:34 GMT -5
By all means, go ahead, once I get the fic posted. I'm hoping to get it done by this weekend at the latest. I think that bit where Blitz says to the zombie, after kicking the grenade back at him, that it had thrown at Hunter "Verziehung, aber sie haben Ihre granate verghessen! (Excuse me, but you forgot your grenade), was priceless! The idiot zombie just stands there, and a bunch of his buddies join him, and they all get blown away. Blitz certainly has matured alot (in my line of stories), since the Rovers' return from aiding the Samurai Pizza Cats against Parvo, Groomer, Storm, and Big Cheese in 'Rovers in Little Tokyo', and he's especially matured since falling in love with Samantha. He's done a good job of it in your fics as well, which has enabled the Rovers to have much better teamwork, now that they've all put aside their differences.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 24, 2007 22:21:51 GMT -5
As Hunter would say, 'Aw, that's nice, thanks!' He should mature in our co-fanfic as well, espeially during th wedding, as he has to make a speech. Maybe marry them in the name of forgiveness...how does that sound?
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 24, 2007 23:39:15 GMT -5
That sounds great. How'd you like that bit where Blitz cracks off to the zombie after he kicks the grenade back at him?
BTW, I've started up chapter three of my story, and I hope to get at least two or more done tomorrow, so it might be up before this weekend, depending on how much I can get done per night.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 25, 2007 0:19:35 GMT -5
That was funny and also very touhing in that he saved Hunter's life after Hunter savd his. Shows that he does think of Hunter as a friend now, which is great to see! I can't wait to read the story, it's gonna be great!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 25, 2007 0:28:47 GMT -5
I'm doing my best to make this one my best fic yet. My girlfriend Kelly is a great source of inspiration for the romantic scenes, and I'm also pretty good at thinking up that kind of thing, as well as the action scenes. I got the idea for the thing with the cinnamon+brown sugar pancakes after I made my girlfriend breakfast this morning, since her father allowed me to stay overnight last night. (We didn't do anything, honest. I'm saving that for after her and I get married, which I do plan on doing sometime soon.) That aside, I'm a pretty good cook, thanks to my mom's instructions. I can whip up just about anything, other than huge, fancy meals.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 25, 2007 0:52:16 GMT -5
Yum!!! Now you;re making me hungry for breakfast!! Does she read the stories befor you post them? Bt this story is gonna be cooler than anything Buffy ever had! (hated that show, it was 100% wrong when it came to vampires!) Your girlfriend doesn't mind us co-writing a story, does she?
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 25, 2007 6:04:25 GMT -5
No, she doesn't. She said she'll still help me out when it comes to writing stuff on my end. She's a really good cook herself (Whoever said that beautiful women can't cook is a sexist idiot...), and she says that one of the things she likes best about me is that I have a kind, caring heart, and a rich imagination.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 25, 2007 12:16:38 GMT -5
AWWW!!!! So sweet! Sniff...so she writes too, huh? Wow, I like her already! So she'll give us a hand? That's great. Tell her she can add anything she wants when we come to the actual wedding too. We can definitely make this the MOST 100% romantic wedding ever written!!! THAT'LL show those dumb soccar Moms!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 25, 2007 13:33:42 GMT -5
That's for sure! Between the three of us, we can probably get the most incredible co-authored story put together. An update on the progress of my story: I'm about to start Chapter Four, so I'm hoping to have it up in maybe two or three days at most.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 25, 2007 17:05:05 GMT -5
It sounds so great. I personally can't wait to see it when you have it up. I bet this is gonna b better than ANYTHING on WB! This could also be a great story about friendship as wll as tru love!
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