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Post by GundamZero on Jul 25, 2007 20:53:41 GMT -5
That's what I intended the fic to be about. The strength of Hunter and Colleen's pure love, and the way that Blitz has matured since marrying Samantha, and is willing to risk his own life to save Hunter's.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 25, 2007 21:08:31 GMT -5
It does sound great. Yeah, show this to the creator of such trash as 'Grey's Anatomy' and 'Despirate Housewives'. Ya know you CAN hav a love that is NOT based primarily in th bdroom. It IS possible to do that!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 25, 2007 21:55:18 GMT -5
No kidding. Hunter shows his love for Colleen in lots of ways besides the bedroom. He's risked his life to save her several times in my fanfic series, and also in the show itself, and in my fics, he's cooked special dishes for her, serenaded her, bought her lovely rings, a locket, and even wrote her a poem on their anniversary, after saving her from Strach. Blitz and Samantha are the same way, as are Exile and Kasha. That, and the whole team is now united with no bickering about who should lead, or anything else. If some villain messes with one Rover, they'll have to deal with the rest of the pack.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 25, 2007 22:25:06 GMT -5
Yeah, THAT'S the way to go!! Why do a lot of people think that Colleen is secretly wanting Blitz and that's why she teases him?! Ya know, I' getting really sick of all of this 'She's attracted to th rebel cause sh knows he has a hart of gold; crap! It got old as far back as Star Wars! Why can't a just plain nice swet guy get the girl period?! Hunter deserves Colleen! Just because he's him, ya know what I ean?
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 25, 2007 23:09:46 GMT -5
Yeah, I get your drift. In fact, in my fic, When Colleen wakes up after being brought to Mordred's castle, one of the zombies moves towards her, offering her a bowl of soup, and she jump kicks him out the window with a yell of "HIYA!!! ROSA PARKS!!!" Mordred enters the room, and says, "Well...I see your quite the little fireball, aren't you. You will be perfect to rule at my side." Colleen: "You get your filthy hands off me, you bloodsucking scum! Huntie is the only one I'll ever love, and when he and the others get here, you're going back to your coffin...as dust!" Mordred: "Not likely. He'll be too late to save you, and even if he does come, I'll have you destroy him." Colleen: "I WILL NEVER, EVER HARM HUNTIE!!! HE'S THE ONE I LOVE WITH ALL ME HEART, AND I'M GETTIN' OUTTA HERE, RIGHT NOW!" *makes for the smashed window, attempting to jump out, using her parachute, but Mordred grabs her, and tears off her parachute pack.* Mordred: "You are not going anywhere, Collie." Colleen: "It's Colleen, you Dracula wannabee. Now, outta my way, before I knock your fangs so far down your throat, you'll need to use a fishing rod to get 'em out!" Mordred: *laughing* "I think not." Colleen: "You asked for it!!! HIYA!!! GEORGE WASHINGTON!!! ABE LINCOLN, JOHN ADAMS!!!" *launches a roundhouse/axekick/uppercut combo, but Mordred catches her fist and pins her to the wall. He stares into Colleen's eyes* Mordred: "You are mine, now. You will forget all about the mutt and the others. From this point forward, you live to serve me." Colleen *tries to fight the mind control*: "No...No...NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!" *Collapses, her strength spent. She looks up, her eyes are glazed over* She says, her voice flat and emotionless, with none of the sweetness and warmth that Hunter loves so much, "Yes, master. I live to serve you. What are your orders?" Mordred: *smiling* "The other mongrels are probably on their way. Go and sleep in your room for awhile, and I'll come get you when it's time for the soul bonding ritual." Colleen: "Yes, Master." *leaves, but as she's walking out, her eyes tear up, as she remembers all her precious moments with Hunter; Their wedding, their anniversary, the birth of their twins, and everything else.* In her mind, She said, "Sorry, Huntie...I cou;dn't hold out against him...PLEASE HELP ME!!!"
Even under control, Colleen is still strong enough to retain a tiny portion of her free will.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 26, 2007 0:07:18 GMT -5
Wow...THAT is exciting!! I'm so hooked and so touched. I can't wait to see the entire thing. Thsi is so great! You're definitely gifted!! I love it!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 26, 2007 0:17:46 GMT -5
I'm about 1/4th of the way through chapter four now. The Rovers are just receiving their new armor, and Hubert's going through it's features, before Hunter makes a battle plan, and they all head off to see Confuse-Us, and Hunter learns how to connect his mind with Colleen, and how to do the Storm of Passion. I'll try and do Chapters 4 and 5 today, and I'm hoping to do 6 and 7 by tomorrow, and hopefully get it posted by Friday or Saturday at the latest. Thanks for saying that I'm gifted. You're a very talented writer too.
While Colleen's in the room sleeping, she dreams of holding Hunter again, when she gets away from Mordred. Even though he's put her in a trance, she still has enough of her mind free that thinking of Hunter can make her strong enough to fight off falling totally under Mordred's control
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 26, 2007 0:52:51 GMT -5
Wow!! I like it, I like it. This is a wonderful story, I think. Supernatrual romance, I love it! Is she in a grassy field or at Headquarters? Are the twins in her dream?
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 26, 2007 1:02:42 GMT -5
She's laying on a blanket in a grassy field, with Hunter at her side. They're having a nice picnic, while the twins play catch nearby. Just as he's about to kiss her, her dream is shattered, when Mordred walks in, and orders her to come with him for the ritual. Just as Mordred is about to begin, Hunter blows the door open, and Blitz and Samantha both fire a full-auto burst from their rifles, taking out the five zombies guarding the area, and then Exile and Kasha blow the ceiling open. Hunter and Colleen then waste Mordred, and they fly home in the Stealth Rover, with the de-vampirized Dr. Catherine Young onboard. They drop her off at her home in D.C., then they go back to HQ.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 26, 2007 1:31:22 GMT -5
Wow...that's so touching! So sweet. Ya just made me cry all over my keyboard! Seeing as how we're sharing stories, do you want me to share some more ideas I had about our co-story?
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 26, 2007 1:37:49 GMT -5
Sure. It's getting late, so I'm gonna go to bed now. I'll talk to you tomorrow, and try to do more work on my story.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 26, 2007 18:03:44 GMT -5
I can't wait to hear it. So, do you think Kelly might b able to help us with the actual ceremony?
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 27, 2007 14:01:14 GMT -5
Yes, she said she'd be more than happy to help. I'm just starting the zombie battle sequence for chapter six in my fic, so I'm definitely gonna have the story up sometime today.
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Post by colleen4ever on Jul 27, 2007 17:19:42 GMT -5
That's great. E-mail me her ideas and yours and w can put hers, ine, and our together to creat a super-amazing marriage ceremony! Tell her to go to town, seeing as how it;s a made up country...but they are Christian. But other than that, she can go to town!
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Post by GundamZero on Jul 27, 2007 22:04:17 GMT -5
Sure thing! She agrees that having Hunter and Colleen doing a duet to "Love Lifts Us Up Where We Belong" is an excellent idea. Her and I are working right now on the dialogue for the rest of the Pizza Cats' cameo appearance, after they arrive late, thanks to Lucille and Francine.
My vampire fic will definitely be up sometime tonight.
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